Lex - Chapter 1
I've completed a re-write and edit of the beginning of the Lex vignettes series and bound it together as "chapter 1." Hopefully this is the start of a trend for me, as I have more than enough material for chapter 2 ready if I can just get my butt in the chair long enough to edit it together. I'm pretty happy with this re-write as I feel it gets many of the pieces of the plot which were obscure across much more clearly.
Once again, fair warning - depending on your definition, these may not be 'work safe.' Don't read if you or your boss is made squeamish by R->NC17 rated material. This story is going to be as gritty, vulgar, sexy, and real as I can make it.
My eyes opened to pure feedback.
Bright, stark, white.
It was that blinding type of white which washes out everything else. I brought my hand to my face, pure porcelain, as if the contrast on the world was up too high. I moved my slender fingers in front of my groggy eyes until I was able to make out the edges of my hand, slowly coming into focus before me.
Instinctively, I reached up to run my hands through my long black hair. The amplified sensation of my hand on my bare scalp woke me from the remaining haze of the quicksed which had put me out.
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